Oh thank you very much JLP this is a very kind of you
This essay sounds smoother than before
Well, I've got a few more question here about..
“well-thinking skill” << I just want to say that children should have a thinking skill (a good one) so that they have something to speak. Can I just say a thinking skill? Is it sounds clear?
rewrite the unclear paragraph: Another significant reason why students cannot communicate in English is that they do not have well-organized thinking skill and which leads them to face a hard situation in speaking. I believe in the saying that “We cannot think unless we have memories”. In order to improve students’ thinking skill and increase their efficiency in English, they will need to memorize many grammatical rules, a large vocabulary and numerous idiomatic expressions. When they are able to manage these, they will be able to think systematically and be able to speak fluently. Is it better?
ps. Would you like to learn Thai? I can teach you hehe..
