Thread: Help! Proofreading an evluation
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Old 29-Jul-2007, 07:31
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Default Re: Help! Proofreading an evluation
Dear JLP, thank you so much for your help. You are right. With some of the changes that you've suggested, it does sound better! Thanks again
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