[RonBee]

Originally Posted by Echo_Wen

With the development of modern science and technology,some aspects of traditional culture are being lost,so some think that the traditional culture and technology will replace by the modern science and technology such as computer or internet,what is your opinion?(topic)

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With the development of modern science and technology, some aspects of traditional culture are being lost, so some think that traditional culture and technology will be replaced by modern science and technology such as computers or the Internet. What is your opinion?

Originally Posted by Echo_Wen

What the modern science and technology flooding into our daily life, some hold the view that the prosperity of modern science and technology must be accompanied by a decline of traditional culture and technology. In my opinion, this point of view is absolutely wrong.

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Some hold the view that the ascent of modern science and technology must be accompanied by the decline of traditional culture and technology. In my opinion, that point of view is absolutely wrong.

That's the kind of thing you need to do. Now, please don't make any more changes in the original.

(I am not supposed to do anybody's homework for them unless I am really bored. )

~R