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 Re: proofreading
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Originally Posted by peter123  Hi there,
Could you proofread the following annoucement?
Ref: Implementation of Electronic Purchase Order Issuance
For environmental concerned [considerations/concerns] and better [to improve]the efficiency of our Purchase Order issued [system], we would like to declare that starting from July 1, 2007[1st July 2007,] and there-after[delete - not necessary], all of our issued P/Os will be printed with this statement: "This is an electronic approved purchase order. No signature is required." By which [As such] it is absolutely [will be] treated as our official order awarded to vendors / contractors for execution in accordance with the "Terms and Conditions of Purchase" along with the relevant orders.
We would appreciate your understanding and acceptance of above arrangement at your end. | .. |