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Old 25-Sep-2007, 00:40
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Default proofreading

"If you don't pay your heating bill soon you may be cut off."

Can we rewrite the above as:

If you don't pay the heating bill,

1. you will find yourself without warmth
2. you will find yourself in Alaska/the fridge
3. you will end up in Canada/the fridge
4. you will end up freezing
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