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Old 25-Sep-2007, 16:45
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Default Re: proofreading
It still doesn't really work for me. It sounds like Alaska or Canada is a giant debtor's prison, where are you sent for not paying your utility bill.

You'll end up FEELING AS THOUGH you were in... would be okay
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