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Re: help edit my farewll email Quote:
Originally Posted by esophea Could any one help edit my farewell email?
Dear Co-Workers
As many of you probably know “today is my last day”. The reason is not related to internal conditions or having been offered a job by another company, but family relation [personal matters/family related] Before I leave, I want to take this opportunity to express my sincere appreciation to my friends, colleagues and superiors, and to let you all know my feeling since I joined Firstcambodia to the reason that it has been to type [point that I typed] “Today is my last day.”
I would like to thank [all of you/everyone] for all your support, patience and friendship you have provided me since I initially [delete - not necessary] started working here. With the help of all of you, we could overcome many challenges both internal and external, our customers, in any circumstance. [and helped our customers at all times]
Definitely, I am also pleased to say thank to all my superiors who have always supported and coached me during my time at Firstcambodia. I have learned a great deal such as personal development, selling skills and so on. Whenever miscommunication is too common [While communication can be a problem {{I am not clear what you are trying to say}}], you consistently impress and inspired me with the sheer magnitude of your misinformation [OOOPS, I don't think you want to say that! - information]. You have taught me more than I could ever ask for and, in most cases, ever did ask for. I have been fortunate enough to work with some absolutely interchangeable [invaluable/wonderful] supervisors on a wide variety of seemingly identical projects - an invaluable lesson in overcoming daily tedium.
There is so much that I haven’t accomplished in the last nine months and I feel uncomfortable that I haven’t achieved what the company set out to achieve - namely achieving the company sales targets. Being so embarrassed, [delete - not required]I leave with a feeling that I haven’t done my best, and I leave with some sadness because of all the friends old and new who have been my support over the past eleven and half months.
And to most of my peers: even though we barely acknowledged each other within these office walls, I hope that in the future, should we pass on the street, you will regard me the same way as I regard you.
Finally, when departing, I wish Firstcambodia continued success in all its endeavors.
I can be reached at my personal email address (EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead). Please keep in touch.
Thanks you again for everything!!!
Sincerely,
E Sophea | I am taking it that you did not check your words in a dictionary? |