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Originally Posted by Naamplao  Resumes are business documents. Business documents are never written using the first person...always use the third person.
You have a lot of good material here for a resume. I will rewrite one section to show you how I would compose your resume...you should try to follow this format.
-Worked on a lot of projects as a developer. And I have experience developing web application systems and client server systems.
-Developed a lot of web application systems. I can design software and coding computer language. I excel at web programming with java and the framework of struts. I can also develop web system with other computer languages.
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- As a software developer, created several applications for web application systems and client server systems using java and the framework of struts in addition to other computer languages such as [you should list the other languages here ]
I am not familiar with this term - framework of struts - I assume it is correct.
You should write in point form and try to condense your points into brief statements using so-called action words such as "created", "developed", "supervised" , etc.
Most resumes should be no more than 2 pages long. Why? Because the first page will be read 100% of the time. The second page will be read only 50% of the time...a third page is read 25% of the time..............
It is important that your good material appears on the first page. If they don't like your resume after reading the first page they won't read any further.
I hope this helps you.
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Thank you so much. I didn’t know that I had better not use first person in business English. With this in mind, I changed my sentence. Could you check again? But, fifth sentence include first person. Because I really want to include that sentence. If it is not good, how can I write this sentence? Let me teach that.
I possess over 4years of experience in the IT Industry including:
• As a software developer, created several applications for web application systems and client server systems using java and the framework of struts
• Wrote documents to share common perception about system detail and project management for leader and co-worker.
• Wrote documents that are for client from about system design to testing.
• Made test case that is suitable for the developing phase.
• Testing software under my background of web developing. I am good at looking many bugs in various systems.