 Re: correct my composition~
it looks like you were in serious trouble.i'm not sure because i don't completely understand your writing,but i feel so.i like thoughtful people,and you must have been thinking alot,mustn't you?
i'm going to start a new theard in the general members' discussion area for people to talk about everydays life things around them.my piont is to share living experience around the world and cooperate in grammar and verbal skills,share vocabulary and those sorts of things.you would be a very good writer there.so i hope to see you there.we could bave lot of things to share.
bye dear! |