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Old 23-Oct-2007, 05:41
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Default Re: correct my article

Dear Anglika, Thanks so much for the correction.

So, the sentence should be corrected as "Now,I feel it is better than last year. At least I could go to the market to buy any food by myself."

"I felt [You start the sentence with "now" = the present] it was better than last year. At least I could go to the market to buy the dairy stuffs [only dairy products? or any food?] by myself."

Thanks again.

Yengfong
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