Thread: Is it correct to write like this? Please advise,thx teachers
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Old 15-Apr-2004, 17:44
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Default Re: Is it correct to write like this? Please advise,thx teac
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Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
Some of us played games and some of us took a nap.
Yes, that is good. However, I suggest using a comma after games. You could also say:
  • Some of us played games, and some of us napped.
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