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Old 01-Nov-2007, 10:43
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Default Re: shopping

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Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
Hi there,
Can you proofread the following sentence.
1. Wesley Mall is fantastic big. When you take a rest after a long shopping, you can watch a film or play roller coaster at the shopping mall.
2. Wartmart is usually crowded during weekend OR weekend.
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peter
#1 adverb required, not adjective; "shopping for a long time".

#2 "weekends" OR "a weekend".
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