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Originally Posted by silverwolf801  Is anything wrong grammatically with these sentences. I really need to know.
1. The reason why I think I should be a should be a Moderator is because well I have been in the cb for approximately 3 years now and well ever since that time I have been very active and I have tried my utmost best to do every thing I ever could for the cb and I will would also take that approach toward the Bleach World section.
I know that I have there is a lot of competition to get this spot and I also know that the chances of me getting this spot it are very slim but I will treat this like an interview to for a job and say yes that I know that I can beat every single other person for this spot because I know that I am better than all of them when it comes down to being a
Moderator.
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I took some time in correcting the grammar for you in order to help you along a bit,
The words that I have highlighted in
Green are words that need to be deleted and the Red words are words that needed to be added in order for it to make sense. 