04-Nov-2007, 20:54
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 Re: Is my letter already good enough? Give me some opinion please!
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Originally Posted by destiny99  My name is L. I am a student currently enroll in ABC university. | My name is L. I am a student currently enrolled in ABC university.
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Originally Posted by destiny99 With this letter, I would like to apply for the entrance of the ABC Programme at ABC University in 2008-2009. I would also kindly like to introduce myself for the candidacy opportunity to be nominated for ABC Scholarship Programme for the 2008-2009 academic year. | I would like to apply to enter the ABC Programme at ABC University in 2008-2009. I would also like to apply to be a candidate for the ABC Scholarship Programme for the 2008-2009 academic year.
I would say that as far as content the letter is fair to good.  |