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Originally Posted by yrmacita  Dear friend,
Thank you very much for your advice. I tried to improve my letter and wrote this. What do you think?
Dear Prof.
Thank you very much for the pleasant time I had yesterday meeting you both. I am really delighted and excited about teaching French, and I appreciate the time you spent showing me the classrooms. After seeing them I am very motivated because that is where I will be teaching French in the near future. Besides, I think the classrooms are very well equipped and modern; I am looking forward to using these advanced resources in my French classes.
I also appreciate very much your willingness to share information about your research work and the conferences at AJTP Association and JIWS. I am very much interested in the subject, and my husband is too. We both will try to attend the conference this weekend.
Sincerely,
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Note:
You could say also instead of too in the next to last sentence.
(The word reprinted in white is a suggested deletion.)
