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Default Re: Two new CPE essays.
The original has 398 words (according to MSWord). My revision has 246 words. Now, decide what you want to put back in. One thing you might want to look at is adjectives. For example, in the phrase "epic blockbuster film" do you need both "epic" and "blockbuster"?

(Post the other essay somewhere else.)

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