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Old 18-Nov-2007, 17:22
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Default Re: Can somebody check my business letter + help me get 100% on it?! ASAP

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Originally Posted by David L. View Post
...and when you get 100%, how will your teacher be able to judge your progress in learning English, your strengths and weaknesses, so that she knows what specific assistance you need?
Well, my teacher always helps the students in every project, without telling them to "do this" or "that" and because the due date for this project is tomorrow and the schools are closed today, I would like the helpers in this thread do the same as my teacher. Just tell me what is not perfect. So I can think and fix it myself. That way, I learn a whole bunch of stuff.

OK, Let me start:
In this sentence:
That is because of its role in the media that people are enjoying in their daily lives.
what can I relpace with "enjoying"? Can I say "using"? and is "media" right by itself or does it need "the" before it.
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