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Old 18-Nov-2007, 19:44
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Default Re: Can somebody check my business letter + help me get 100% on it?! ASAP

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Originally Posted by David L. View Post
That is because of its(censorship) role in the media that people are enjoying in their daily lives.

What does the red part of the sentence mean?
I wanted to say something like:
The subject of your presentation was well chosen. That (refers to last sentence) is because of censorship's role in media that people are using (I do not know if this is the right word + it refers to media) in their daily lives.

Do you know the answer of the question in my last post?
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Is "media" right by itself or does it need "the" before it.
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