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Old 23-Nov-2007, 16:25
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Default Re: please, Edit my CV and Cover
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in the position of....
Please find my resume (enclosed)
I graduated from Norton University with a Bachelor's degree in computer science.
I have completed several courses in....

Delete "Anyway" (last sentence, second paragraph).

My background seems to fit your requirements well.

Now it is finished.
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