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 Re: improving the structure of a paragraph
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Originally Posted by thomasRavenelli 
I am wondering if someone can improve the style of this paragraph. I feel that the structure is not strong enough.
X inquired about when the students who graduate in the fall took the Y exam. Z answered that the current graduates took the test during this semester before the completion of requirements, but that it will become a standard procedure in the future to take/sit the exam during the junior year.
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