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Originally Posted by Anglika  His lifelong ambition is to be a travelling jewel merchant, specializing in making purchase of rare gemstones from poverty-stricken countries and selling them to well-to-do gem connoisseurs. |
Thanks, Anglika, for the rewriting.
I like your revision better--it's clear and concise.
But I still have some doubt, though--what's wrong with "touring jewelry" in the base text?