The form is good (mostly). However, you should indent bulleted items.
Suggestions:
- results-oriented
- Possesses
- In phrase "member of kitchen staff team" delete "team".
- washing dishes
- Selling souvenirs
- Make a space (one line) before Education as you are starting a new section.
- Works well alone or as part of a team
- Delete "Willing to become professional" (What does that mean?).
- Say: has highly developed analytical skills and learns fast
- Most adults have driver's licenses (note spelling). Unless it is a requirement of the job there is probably no point to mentioning that you posses a driver's license.
- Hobbies:
(I don't guarantee that I have found everything that could be improved upon, nor do I guarantee that you will get the job.
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(PS: You might have noticed that I changed the title of this thread. I will change it back to what it was if you insist.)
~R