 Re: Help, correct my mistakes
Dear (Mr./Ms) RonBee,
I am an English student, and I learn to correct the first paragraph. I wonder would you please criticize my work. I appreaciate and thank you.
"When I was choosing the theme that I would write about I was decided it had to be something from science, especially from physics. I am interested in physics so I started to search on the internet and found the article that isn’t so fresh but I was captured by it. On the other hand the article isn’t as shock as it seems. Nowadays in the science there are many fascinating researches so why not plastic semiconductors? There are many developed technologies in chemistry, molecular physics or solid state physics and they are extremely studied. Especially in the world these researches are financed a lot."
When choosing the theme that I would write about, I was decided it was something bout science, especially from physics. I am interested in physics, so I started searching on the internet and finding it out. This article wasn’t so fresh nor was it as shock as it seemed, but I was interested in it. Nowadays, the world costs a lot of money for many fascinating researches study about science, why they study about molecular physics or solid state physics, but they don't study and research about plastic semiconductors?
Again, many thanks for your time
NamThao  |