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Default Re: environmental essay for CPE, please correct

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Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
However, this prediction which will not be realized if there is a way for the self-destruction countdown to be reversed.

"...this is a prediction that will not..."
How about simply deleting the "which"?

(I missed that. I read it as if the "which" wasn't there. Somehow, I saw: "However, this prediction will not be realized if....")

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