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Old 17-Dec-2007, 09:10
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Smile Please help my writing

Hello, this little story is made up by the following phases:

be determined by  
have something to do with  
be central to sth.   
in contrast   
due to  
be deprived of

Please help me correct it. Thanks a million!
The story is :


This terrible cosequence is due to the bad weather. When will rain is determined by the nature. Abudant rainfail is central to crops to grow on nicely. In contrast, if there is no regual precipitation, farmers life will be took a bad knock. The farmers were deprived of all the rights by harsh policy. And this is the worse thing can even destroy their life completely.
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