[amigos4]

Aniu,

Welcome to the Forum!

It is difficult for us to correct an entire essay that is presented in the Forum. To be candid, most of the native speakers would rather attempt to respond to as many postings as time allows, rather than focusing on one very long posting.

With this in mind, I have selected a portion of your essay that I believe needs to be re-worked. Please edit it and re-submit it for the group to respond.

By this way, it trend to train a lot students who can get a high score in the English test, but can not read, write and speak English correctly. For example, when came to US the first time, a housekeeper in our building asked me, “how are you doing?” I replied, “I am doing nothing.”

Cheers,
Amigos4