28-Dec-2007, 01:55
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 Re: English Education In China
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Originally Posted by Aniu  Amigos4,
Thanks for your help and encouragement! It helps a lot. Your revision did not abandon the essence of my premise. It also gives me the ideal for how to rewrite other part of my essay.
Best wishes,
Aniu | Aniu,
I am happy to help you.
A friendly suggestion: change 'ideal' to 'idea'. " It also gives me ideas for how to rewrite other part(s) of my essay. I'd enjoy seeing some of your corrections!
Enjoy!
Cheers,
Amigos4 |