Thanks for your correction heidita. I still have some questions though.
You add 's' in 'point of views' so it becomes 'points of views'. Is it correct because usually only one 's' is added to plural form. Shouldn't it become 'points of view' rather than 'points of views'?
I also made some correction regarding the last paragraph. I want some comment from you. Is it better or worse?
Here it is:
I believe this scholarship will open my path to do research in A country in the future. This scholarship will become a springboard and my first step towards my goal. I will work hard and finish my bachelor degree with good result if I can get this opportunity. After that, I plan to continue my master degree and do research in A country. I sincerely hope that my qualifications and educational experiences will meet your high requirements.
I also want to know whether my letter answer the question given. What do you think?
