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Old 06-Jan-2008, 22:02
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Default Re: Motivation Letter, Take a Look Please...

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Thanks for your correction heidita.
You're welcome.
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You add 's' in 'point of views' so it becomes 'points of views'. Is it correct because usually only one 's' is added to plural form. Shouldn't it become 'points of view' rather than 'points of views'?
Sorry, didn't pay attention and didn't cross out the s in views. Yes, it must be points of view.


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I believe this scholarship will clear my path to do research in A country in the future. This scholarship will become a springboard and my first step towards my goal. I will work hard and surely finish my bachelor degree with a good result if I can get this opportunity. Later on, I plan to continue my master degree and do research in A country. I sincerely hope that my qualifications and educational experiences will meet your high requirements.
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I also want to know whether my letter answers the question given. What do you think?
I believe you have done a good job. They will surely take you!

good luck!

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