 Re: can you check my grammar in these few sentences?
By taking the Business 420, I expect to improve my verbal and nonverbal communication skills, and fulfill the prerequisite requirement of my graduation.
In addition, I want to learn how to prepare and deliver a persuasive speech, and I also want to learn to be comfortable talking in front of a group of people.
By understanding the dynamics of effective public speaking, I want to improve my confidence and calmness in public speaking.
After graduating from USC, I plan to work either in the financing or accounting industry.
In future, I wish to work for an online brokerage firm or insurance company as a financial advisor.
I definitely want to work in the United States or England because both these countries are playing a significant role in the world’s economy.
Five years from now, I plan to pursue a PhD degree in finance, and work in a financial institution. |