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Old 09-Jan-2008, 19:03
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Default Re: could you please review my essay?

hi, Nam Thao!

Thanks for replying. It is so important.
I needed to write an assay about some electronic device or a gudget that i cannot live without, personally me.

Do you mind to reply any more assays, i had so much and nop one to check them.

Some comments: first, you cannot use , before the word "and"
otherwise means- in a different case or you can use it as the word besides...

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