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Old 12-Jan-2008, 13:22
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Default Re: Please Someone Give A Look To My Conclusion Please ! Por Favor!
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Originally Posted by yrmacita View Post
Yes, It wasnt clear right?

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It could be more clear, yes. You could begin by saying that the Peruvian families will continue living in Japan.

I recommend that the language be simplified.

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