[RonBee]

Originally Posted by empacaon

So one time, he wished that they would just disappear in this world so he could do whatever he wants.

At one point he wished that they would disappear so that he could do whatever he wanted to do.

Originally Posted by empacaon

After a while, he experienced loneliness without his family so he wished again that his family would come back soon.

After a while, he felt lonely, so he wished to have his family back.

Originally Posted by empacaon

While wandering on a hillside, he then saw a portal. He was curious what’s inside so he came closer.

While he was wandering on a hillside he saw a portal. He was curious about what was inside it so he got closer to it.

Originally Posted by empacaon

Inside the portal, he saw nothing but darkness. He was afraid and wanted to go back where he came from, but he realized that the portal was already closed. He shouted for help, but the only reply he got was a voice behind the darkness. The voice said that he wanted to test the boy’s faith in his decisions. The voice reminded the boy that his decisions will affect the outcome of his test— either he will be able to save his family or kill them with his own hands.

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a voice coming out of the darkness

Originally Posted by empacaon

5. Markuz is already confused if he really wants his family to be saved or not. In this empty land setting, he will see a letter written by an unknown person for his parents. The letter says something about Markuz’ real identity. By this time, Markuz confusion will start to increase. Three doors will then be shown and Markuz has to choose on which door he wants to enter (D1.c1, D1.c2, <node>).

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Markuz is confusd about whether he wants to save his family or not.

Markuz has to choose which door he wants to open.