Nobody is perfect, and I don't necessarily catch every mistake. What should be changed in the following paragaph (and what should it be changed to)?
As a consequence, patients on transplants lists will be given more hope. As a matter of fact, the newspapers reported recently that a transplant patient had celebrated his tenth anniversary of his operation. Though, people live longer nowadays, they still age in appearance. However, one can resort to cosmetic surgery to improve their looks.
