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 Re: Michael Jordan
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Originally Posted by bilsonx  Does this look ok? And is the title ok? Is there anything I should add or take out? It's a descriptive paragraph of michael jordan. | Quote:
Originally Posted by bilsonx NBA Legend with a Good Heart Michael Jordan was an outstanding basketball player, well known for his great accomplishments and his good heart. He was the best basketball player in the NBA. | Quote:
Originally Posted by bilsonx He was a 5-time Most Valuable Player, won 6 NBA titles with the Chicago Bulls, and was ranked first in scoring average when he retired. | Make two sentences out of that. ~R |