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Old 24-Jan-2008, 02:08
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The first sentence is OK.


We are requesting sponsorship of 12 robots at $6,000 per robot. (Is this correct - $6,000 EACH??)

We hope the confirmation need 2 months before application deadline of August 12.

This sentence is not clear. Do you want to say: Our completed application is due to the Festival officials by August 12. We need confirmation of your sponsorship 2 months before that date, by June 12.

Is this what you mean to say?
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