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Old 26-Jan-2008, 13:09
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Default Re: Hurry please i need this paragraph checked before 2

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Originally Posted by bilsonx View Post
Unlike many superstar athletes, he was not pushed by his parents to be a great athlete, but rather to be a good person with strong moral character, confidence, and a high self esteem which they succeeded.
Delete the last three words in that paragraph. Also, it should be compassionate and not passionate (in a later sentence).

Why did you start a new thread on this subject?


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