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Originally Posted by epic Hi, i am 18 years old and i have studied english for 5 years. So i was just wondering how good my english is. I would be very grateful if you could comment on the language in the text below. |
That is good except there are a couple of punctuation problems.
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Originally Posted by epic this is a review of a film named Naruto. |
Capitalize "This" in that sentence.
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Originally Posted by epic What is life without goals,dreams and friends. Being devoid of all these
crucial life-driving things is sure to make your life here on earth a living hell. |
That is good except that the first sentence is clearly supposed to be a question, so you should end that sentence with a QM (question mark). Also, space after the ending punctuation.
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Originally Posted by epic The importance of dreams is something thatīs emphasized numerous times throughout the yet 82 released episodes. Making me as well think what goals in life do i have. Naruto is heavily imbued with symbolizes such as mentioned. One may criticize its repetitiveness though, especially when you have heard how important it is to have friends, at least ten times. |
The first sentence makes sense if you delete "yet". For the second sentence, try: "It makes me think about my goals in life." The third sentence calls for a noun instead of "symbolixes". Try: "Naruto is heavily imbued with symbolism." Would you say that the film is repetitive to the point of being annoying?