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Old 03-Feb-2008, 19:02
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Default pls correct my letter(informal)

pls correct my letter specially the format. Is this format correct.
Q. Write a (short)letter to your friend about your school life.


Xyz
P.o.Box No-12345
Jeddah, KSA

Dear Abc,
How are you and your parents?I couldn't write a letter to you as i was busy with my school life. Although school life is hectic,i enjoy every moment i spend in my school.At 7:oo a.m in the morning,i start to school.
After the morning assembly our classes begin. In the classroom, my teachers do a superb job. In the free periods,i spend my time playing with my friends
and sometimes roam around.Convey my regards to aunty and uncle.Reply soon.

Yours faithfully,
Xyz

Many people write the address and sign on the right .Which is correct?
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Also pls correct this sentence.

There were beautiful furniture in the rooms of the castle.

or
There was beautiful furniture in the rooms of the castle.
Which is grammatically correct.
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