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Old 11-Feb-2008, 00:10
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Default Re: Please correct my cover letter as soon as possible, thx :)

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Originally Posted by CzechOne View Post
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Your advice is very good. In fact, it is so good that I have been hesitant to make any suggestions. However, here goes.




Suggested change:
I am very interested in the accountant position advertised in the Al Ahram newspaper on xx xx xxxx.
Since accountant is not a proper noun, I don't think it should be capitalized.




Number two:
Throughout my years of education at Ain shams University, I studied commerce in three languages: French, English and Arabic.
Since "faculty" refers to the teachers at a school, college or university, I don't think the word fits here. Instead, I suggest using "school", "college" or "department".


What do you think?



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