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Old 23-Feb-2008, 22:12
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Default Re: Story - pls. look through for mistakes, right register

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Originally Posted by popsie View Post
Thank you very much for your quick replay.

I have one more question:

So, if I use

"Trevor and Emma were an elderly couple. They had been living alone in a small town near London."

Does it mean that they died, they are not alive now, at time of speaking ??
I believe it would suggest that they are no longer an elderly couple, so yes, they have died (or grown younger, and if that's the case then I would like to know how they did it!)

I would write those three sentences as one sentence, maybe something like this: "Trevor and Emma, an elderly couple living alone in a small town near London, were preparing for their wedding anniversary."
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