Re: IELTS essay A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban i Dear Mohammed Abu Risha,
Thank you very much for your help. Actually, I intended to take TOEFL iBT examination but I had to change to IELTS because it would be easier for me to study in EUROPE or Australia instead of studying in America. Some universities in England require a 6.5 overall band of IELTS. I find listening and reading much more easier than speaking and writing. The topic of task 2 IELTS writing is especially difficult for me to understand. It is very kind of you to spend your valuable time correcting my essay. I would recheck my essay based on your comments. Thanks again. Best wishes to you! |