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Old 25-Feb-2008, 09:20
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With punctuation:

your pearly eyes
bare my desires,
your maiden princess
burns by your fires.
under your insatiable desires
and above your sacred skies,
Feel for me.. your maiden princess is here for you.

Hope that helps, and unless you want to make writing in small case a trade mark of your own style (as has been done before), you could do with some capital letters at the beginnings of the lines.

SB
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