Hi Flowerseed
I quickly read your piece and the remote stood out but I have re-read and as a native born english speaker there are a few points that would be better put in a more concise way. Originally I gave up as it did go on a bit.
I agree with your feelings with regard to "I am tired of learning and working" it does change the meaning. I would perfer you to rearrange the sentence
Would you like me to read through again and offer my thoughts?
