Thread: Gramatically correct check please
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Old 25-Feb-2008, 23:23
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Default Re: Gramatically correct check please
" Our company was founded on the premise of manufacturing and supplying quality solutions and we continue to listen to you, our clients, responding and anticipating your changing needs and business challenges."

I agree; it warrants two separate sentences:


" Our company was founded on the premise of manufacturing and supplying quality solutions. We continue to listen to you, our clients, in order to respond and anticipate your changing needs and business challenges."
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