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Old 04-Mar-2008, 09:55
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Default Need Help : Kindly Correct My Application Letter

Hi Anyone,

I'm just be a member. I'm not very good in English Writing. I think this website is very useful for anyone who wants to improve english language.

Pls. kindly correct my application letter as below.

Thank you very much in advance

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have just seen your advertisement in web site www.jobsdb.com on Feb 27, 2008 requesting applications for Sales Specialist. I believe that this position is ideal for my work experience and I am eager to be on your staff.


Currently, I work as Senior Thailand Sales Executive for XXX, which is manufacturing and exporting CDs & DVDs. Your company is one of my customer. Although, my selling products and services experience are not matched your requirements, I am confident that my knowledge and more than 5 years of experience in sales as well as negotiation skills will benefit your company and its goal.


Enclosed resume, you would find more details of my skills and experience as well as training courses. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you at your convenience to discuss my qualification for a position with you. Please call me at 555555 or via email at XXXXX


I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.

Your sincerely,
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