 Re: Another episode at the library
before my eyesight: I figured you'd catch me on that, but it sounded cool. What I meant was that the guy was "the threat that's in my view / sight, that I can see"
I want to say that he's a threat in my sight: 'the threat confronting me' makes sense, but that's not the stylistic choice I want to make. Is "the threat in my view" ok? or do you have other suggestions?
'midnight,' of course! how could I have forgotten the word?? (yeah I usually study at the library til 2am... too many distractions at home)
- HKB
Last edited by HaraKiriBlade; 05-Mar-2008 at 05:42.
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