05-Mar-2008, 10:41
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 Re: Another episode at the library
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Originally Posted by HaraKiriBlade  before my eyesight: I figured you'd catch me on that, but it sounded cool. What I meant was that the guy was "the threat that's in my view / sight, that I can see"
I want to say that he's a threat in my sight: 'the threat confronting me' makes sense, but that's not the stylistic choice I want to make. Is "the threat in my view" ok? or do you have other suggestions? Several options: In my view/In my opinion/In my eyes, the guy is a threat and I want to get rid of it/him.
'midnight,' of course! how could I have forgotten the word?? (yeah I usually study at the library til 2am... too many distractions at home)
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