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Old 09-Mar-2008, 19:40
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Default Re: short story needs edit?

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Originally Posted by Xzibit21 View Post
It was 11:00am and period three had just ended. I was so happy as my stomach was begging for food with its constant noises. I began walking towards my locker when all of a sudden--bang! A kid pushed another student into a locker. The two began fighting and threw a variety of upper cuts and jabs. A large crowd of students gathered around them.
You were hungry and happy?
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