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Old 15-Mar-2008, 08:33
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Default Re: Could you please correct/adjust my cover letter?

Yes - it is a good sentence!!
How about prasing it this way:



In conclusion, I am confident that the academic grounding I gained at Bologna University would serve my successfully undertaking the challenges of the xxx program, and provide the best opportunity for me to develop academically, professionally, and personally.


or
...and provide my best opportunity for continued development, academically, professionally, and personally.

All the best!
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